These negative words counter any sense of hope and joy at the prospect of moving away from the front and the ‘haunting flares’.
“Owen uses onomatopoeia to let the reader hear how much the soldiers are suffering when …” structure – exclamation mark, capital letters; and tone – irony in which Owen creates that effect – each of these poetic techniques will be the paragraph topics in the main body of your essay.
2 Brief summary maximum 50 words Struggling to make it to the rest camp The soldiers are tired and exhausted They are sick and suffering severely after fighting in the trenches They suffer a mustard gas attack 3 Main Body of Essay This consists of 5 SEAL paragraphs structured as follows: STATEMENT = topic sentence EVIDENCE ANALYSIS LINK Each paragraph will discuss a different poetic technique ( TOPIC )s.
He dies walking back to his campsite, tired, miserable and bloodied from fighting for his country.
In his state of weariness he is hit with a gas bomb.
The suggestion of the soldiers being senseless is backed up with the line 'Deaf even to the hoots of shells dropping softly behind' Another metaphor that reinforces this is 'men marched asleep' this again tells me how tired the men are.
You could say were walking almost unconsciously but at the same time not daring to fall asleep in fear of being killed.In the first stanza of the poem we are told much about the men's appalling conditions. Middle The metaphor 'Drunk with fatigue' suggests that perhaps the men have become so tired that the have no idea what is happening around them.The words 'blind' and 'lame' also suggest to me that their senses are debilitated in some ways.Before the war in 1915 he was a private tutor in France, he liked teaching but after visiting some young men in hospital during the war he decided to go back to England and sign up.After some traumatising experiences Owen injured in Somme and sent home, but returned to the war in August of 1918.He suggests that, with such knowledge, those at home ‘would not tell’ lies to children ‘ardent’ for glory.Owen uses contrast to intensify the horror experienced by soldiers and his audience. Owen emphasises the panic by his use if the word ‘ecstasy’, often associated with love and passion but suggesting here extreme actions of a very different nature.This nightmare scenario is heightened by words which gather in intensity: ‘guttering,’ ‘choking,’ and ‘drowning’ in l.16.The use of the word ‘guttering’ is particularly unsettling.(2) ESSAY TASK Each topic sentence must link back to the key words in the question. Even though the third and fourth lines might seem to be positive, the ‘rest’ towards which they ‘trudge’ is ‘distant’.